Based on feedback from the previous meeting I added in the screen below. I also added in a bird flying over the girl to add some movement(puppet tool).
Since the animation is about the women’s memories of what they experienced and the viewer sees it as they women remember it I kept the audio from my first version. It opens with a young girl on a swing all alone. Children can be heard playing in the background. This symbolises her age and what point she was at in her life. Sounds and images that the women remember.
An important part in the story is when she realises she is not like everyone else. She imagines herself with a big beard even though that is not the case. I added in a sound effect here to show that she was imaging the worse.
Story 1 – Scene 1 – https://vimeo.com/124784560